Evaluation - Ella Blunden

Bright lighting

Same shot as above but darker

Framing - not straight + cuts of characters legs yet lots of free space

Good point of view shot showing through the characters eyes

Camera Work

• Had some hand held camera work which showed the setting through the characters eyes.
• Variety of shots including tracking shot of the charcter walking through the corridor.
• Framing could have been tighter so character was more evenly spaced between the frame.

Editing

• Could have been smoother edits (too jolty) - so they match up

Mise en scene

• Lighting could have been used more effectively to create an atmosphere and to add continunity.

Sound

• Take out unneccessary background noise
• Could have used garage band to add soundtrack and/or diegetic sound

Continunity errors

• The most obvious being complete change of character between cuts
• The lighting could have been more consistant.
• When opening the doors it was obvious in the change of settings because of type of door and change in lighting.
• The speed the character opened the door - changed inbetween cuts.